An excellent sales letter from copywriter Scott Haines selling an eBook series from Trump University in 2006. In addition to the...View More
website, the copy was also used in an almost identical direct mail piece. Both are said to have performed very well. The sales letter is pitching a $39.95 risk-free trial for an eBook series, but hooks people in with free bonuses. The two big bonuses mentioned at the beginning are a DVD & special report (both digital). However, another two bonuses for a free membership & personal consultation are also mentioned towards the end right before the price is mentioned. Up until the price is mentioned, the sales letter is heavily focused on free. Even when describing “what the catch is”, it’s only mentioned that they must enroll in a risk-”free” trial. Another big theme is the idea of getting “inside” information that comes directly from Donald such as in the “Candid Conversation” DVD. He’s what people are buying into so the more it seems like the info comes directly from him, the better. The copywriter, Scott Haines, is known for using lots of bullets, which is evident here. There are a ton of excellent bullets & I point out some of the formulas used in the annotations. The pitch ends strongly with a P.S. that ties the prospect’s success & character to whether they take action or not.