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The only difference from the first email is this product image & Jim's photo at the top.
"That way, I'll take YOUR copy" --> again, making the experience seem more one-to-one & personalized like he's doing you a favor. Now, you're more likely to feel guilty if you don't follow-up. The final sentence hinting at bonuses makes for a great finish, leaving them wondering what the bonuses are.
Worded to seem like he personally put a book aside just for you. It's almost like he did you a favor (working the law of reciprocity). "I just need your permission" is simplifying the action required, like there's minimal effort involved.
"Deserves to know the truth" -- this gets you thinking "what is the truth?" which arouses your curiosity. Note the mention of "dangers" again.
It's important that the reader understands they can ONLY get the book through this offer. The last thing you want is the prospect to abandon your funnel & go through a 3rd party.
"I wasn't intending to write this" --> makes the book's content seem more authentic & relevant...it wasn't planned. "Critical dangers" --> tied to avoiding harm. "Begin preparing for right now" --> encouraging urgent action.
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